Tuesday, 28 October 2008

TANGY TRUTHS...

I am that exotic bird you saw last night
I am that baby you rocked to sleep

I am that unicorn you rode last night
I am that spirit that helped you See

I am Macbeth's evil witch
I am Blyton's periwinkle fairy

I am destiny's contradiction... i am ecstasy!
I am an illusion... i am your reality!

I am all this and much more
I am all this but nothing more

Ignore and live.
Discover and die.

56 comments:

Express said...

Fuuaaccckkk!!!!
super-sexy!

my fav verse,
"I am destiny's contradiction... i am ecstacy!
I am an illusion... i am your reality!"

mind boggling I tell u :-)


btw,
heard Alanis Morissette's 'I'm a bitch, I'm a lover?"
do, ull love :-)

Express said...

u knw wht,
I expected ranbir kapoor...

ROTFL!


aayush designed the template?
neat job baby,
very!
:-)

Trinaa said...

thanku baby!! m a bitch m a lover??!! waha censor board nai hai kya? :P ..but vil definitely listen to it! :D

n heyyyyyyyy RK is not d only thing i write abt!! in dis blog u'll nt get anything u might get on my other blog...this will gv u the truth..abt me n wht i think...really...which can be hard to handle..hence d privacy part!!

Express said...

oh myy...
tujhe sochana bhi aata hai?

hark...

:-P

love ya!

and gaana sunn le, theme is very similar 2 the poem u wrote and is one of my favorite songs :-)

Lucifer said...

**I am that baby you rocked to sleep

m d baby u rocked to sleep...i so agree wid that one :)

this is niceeee!!!!! really nicee!!!

Aayushi said...

Helllllllllloooooooooooooo?

I did not design the template :P
I designed her header (which is still under construction..rotfl!)

NIceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee tinnuu!
this was an awesome poem for a start

Btw..Tangy truths ka template kuch sleeazzzy sa nahi hona chahiye?
red or something? :P

Aayushi said...

(Aayushi hre) :P

HP said...

"I am destiny's contradiction... i am ecstacy!
I am an illusion... i am your reality!"

maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnn !!!!!!!!! u are so goddamn awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shit !!!

LOVED the last 2 lines........... supr LOVED them. shit i want to die.........................

:'(

this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooooooo nice .. i cant tel u what im feeling.....
damn !!.......damn !!!

tinnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!

aarrrggghhh! !!!

HP said...

"Ignore and live.
Discover and die."

mummmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i cant stop reading this !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arv said...

wow gal... first up... kewl blog, nice pics and thanks for the invite...

I loved this poem... especially the last lines... echoes my dreams :)

Thanks for sharing mate... enjoyed it a lot...

have a nice evening... cheers...

Trinaa said...

@shatabdi..chub be! bahut kuch chalta hai iss nanhe dimag mein:P

@mayz..haha..sleep my child sleep! :P

@mee alias aayushi...i understood by d comment that it was u paglu baby!!
//sleeazzzy
..wtf..wtf??!

@heerings..heylo ji!! :D
hope u r proud of me..n plz start acknowledging d fact that we r frndz in public now! :PPPPP

@heerings again...
//"Ignore and live.
Discover and die."

mummmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i cant stop reading this !!!!!!!!!!!!!"

..yes yes continue..i dont mind!:D

@arv..n how cud i not invite u?
//I loved this poem... especially the last lines... echoes my dreams :)

haha..i guess we think alike then :)

HP said...

i always did ! hunh !!

and again.. mummmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!

Aayushi said...

Sleazy :P

rotfl.

This is the account by which you invited me!
Tch..I have to switch accts when I need to hop hop down to my blog :(

Che said...

Ignore and live.
Discover and die.

Now thats a no brainer!

Think Tank said...

r sure u r tinni? mere ko thoda CONFUSION HO RAHA HAI ..DID SOME POET RECENTLY DIE? tere mein uska bhoot ghus gaya kya ...mindblowing poem...leikin dusra blog kyun?

Trinaa said...

@hp...yes yes paglu singh..muuuuuummmmaaaaaaa!! :P

@aayushi...hv sent u an invitation on d other id too bachcha..n stop calling my blog sleazy!! is not!!

@che...i noe!! :P

@farah...yeaa baby..some poet 3rd rate poet definitely died to mk room 4 me! :P

n dusra blog isliye kyunki meri aadhi family mere open blog ko padhti hai..n i dont want them to read d kind of stuff m goin to put up here! :P

"Ignore and live.
Discover and die."

if dey read this then main jald hi tara ban jaaongi!

Bhai with Chai said...

that was one hell ov a read girl!
like.. wohooo!
and I see people have already told ya these rock :-

//I am destiny's contradiction... i am ecstacy!
I am an illusion... i am your reality


//Ignore and live.
Discover and die.


very very very...nice!
Glad I was invited! :)

Bhai with Chai said...

again..
ignore and live.. discover and die..

this is gonna be in my head for a long long time!

legen..



wait for it..




dary!!!

Anonymous said...

Ecstacy! wow! That is very Provocative. I am all into this Tangy blog here and your template is great!!!!!!!!!!!


NE

Trinaa said...

@bhai...welcome to my personal space ji :))

//wait for it..
i will!

@Ne...heyy thanks dat aayushi gal designed d header :))

Kopal said...

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg !!!!!!
m totally in luv wid this poem !!
omg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ure a-m-a-z-inggggg !!!!

Trinaa said...

hahaha..thanku kopsu!! mwaaah :D

Cяystal said...

Arey pagluu..i wuzn calling your blog sleazy..mai bol rahi thi ki blog ka naam is tangy truths..so the stuff should be a bit bold and more ..you knw!

as in blue sa template is very cute cute sa..not the UNADULTERATED TYPES! :D

Bhai with Chai said...

oi.. teko samajh aaya tha "wait for it" ka mallab yahan? ('?')
zaldi batao!

Trinaa said...

@aayushi...u r absolutely right!! bring on d black one ji...dis one is tooo...ummm..u noe na?

@bhai...eeerrrr..ab thoda doubt ho raha hai...bata hi do bhai..my imagination runs a bit haywire :P

jayu said...

Loved the poem tinni.
very evocative and riveting imagery.
'Ignore and live,Discover and die'....unusual and thought provoking.
A salute, darling,

Love you,

Di

Trinaa said...

salute? ur d one who should be saluted di..u churn out one masterpiece after the other...pheeewww!!

HP said...

@ bhai: humko samajh me aa gaya tha!! on the 1st read only. this trinaa na ... bevkoof hai ekdum ;)

Trinaa said...

wht d..? acha then kindly explain pathak!!

Bhai with Chai said...

hehe.. chalo tum fight karo thoda ispar! :P
total heroine ho dono! :D :D
adorable!

Trinaa said...

aag lagane wali mata..mystery toh solve kardo!! :D

Urv said...

:) For I was invited

:) For I totally love the second pic in the header

:) For the poem. Super ossum tinns..

Trinaa said...

:) 4 being one of d 1st ppl to comment on my 'simple' blog

:) 4 always being so hilariously funny

:) 4 coming back

:) :) :) :) these r jus like that! :P

Urv said...

:) :) :)

Yeah I know that post from which I started reading your blog. Don u think its time to change the header. The world DOES read it now :D

:) :) :)

Trinaa said...

hahaha..d world is not enough...lol! i neva mk sense do i??? :P

Urv said...

Sense make karke karna bhi kya hai.. As such there are so many sensible people in the world ;)

Trinaa said...

muhahahha..i swear! :P

Preeti said...

good good...

"i am an illusion, i am your reality"

ladkiiii...

*ecstacy* - typo... *ecstasy*

this one's also contrast words...come out of it now and try something new...

by the by... i just found out that alanis morisette also sang i'm a bitch...hmmnnn ... meredith brooks is the original singer you know...

Trinaa said...

ladkiii? muhahaha..ye kis liye tha ji?

n typo corrected.. :)

n this genre seems to be d easiest 4 my brain :))...lets c..maybe in future i will end up writing something worthwhile :)))

meredith brooks? acha..will dwnld this one too then :D

Kasturi Shinde Yadav said...

Amazing !

nands said...

I liked the last two lines.
A kind of warning! :)

RiverSoul said...

amazing.
Liked it.

Guess wat!
This is the first blog ive visited since march 2009!
:P

Zubair said...

Wonderful poem..
loved ur picturization n the way you look at things.. keep up the good work.

A said...

nice!

Mihir Balantrapu said...

would you really vouch for the truth in the last two lines? verrr nicee :)

KP said...

Hey

i had written this a long long time ago

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I'm a chaser, a snatcher, a grade A bomb so nuclear,
I drink at every bar; I sell my disease to every patient.
I'm a screamer, I'm a geezer, I'm a twenty thousand watt amplifier,
everything feels like my playground now.

I'm a transformer,an impostor, my own bomb dismantler,
I am a virus in disguise, with only my eyes to hide.
i am a penetrator, a sinner, a bone chilling comforter,
My mirth begins when you are in deep sleep.

I'm a liar , a craver, a carbon monoxide infiltrator,
Wherever i go, trouble follows.
I'm a striker, a biter, a Vampire Motorcycle Rider,
Hey, but let me tell you about my Alter Ego.

I'm a cracker, a toker, I'm the funniest story teller,
I make believe the skies are under my feet.
I'm a snoozer, I'm a "Kramer", I talk faster than Chris Tucker,
I'm right here but way out of your reach.

I'm a stalker,a watcher, I'm a "whatever i've got, a holder" ,
I am an SAP configurator and i am still unemployed.
I'm a smoker, i'll make friends even with a stammerer,
I am just a little faster than your average lawn mower.

I'm a mocker, a conner, I am a spoon fed eater,
I am shy and talkative at the same time.
I'm a pepper, i'm a sweetener,and i can even be sour,

You see, mostly i am a confuser!!

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nice work (yrs, not mine)

KP said...

like careful with that axe, eugene?

axe, in this case notebook keyboard...yes i hardly write per se ...i type
i mean i do write, but not with a pen and paper (any more)..i just type it with a keyboard...even if i do write on paper, eventually i type what i wrote and a lot of editing happens at that point.

and i think most people we come in contact with , do too

its time we changed it to Typer(TM) to allow for the differentiation between Typists and/or Keyboardists...unless of course it is too demeaning for "writers" to label themselves as typers(TM).

not me though...i am completely fine with it.

please do let me know if you had a different angle to the whole being careful thingy

Supriya said...

hey!i dint know you wrote poetry...and such nice poetry :)

Trinaa said...

'twas a fluke Sup. Sadly.

Sruthisagar Yamunan said...
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Sruthisagar Yamunan said...

Seeing birds at night points to something really serious!

:P

Allen's Grey Matter Inc. © 200...whatever !! said...

"I am destiny's contradiction... i am ecstasy!
I am an illusion... i am your reality!"

Oh my good frikking flying spaghetti monster God..!! Where do you get something like that from..!! Brillanz

rainboy said...

You're so many things,maybe an illusion :)

loved reading the post...

Take care
the smell awaits you

Sh@s said...

Wonderful and intriguing :)
Waiting for more such creations.

PhilO♥ said...

Amazing!! :)

Rià said...

I loved the post so beautifully worded and i really like ur template too!

 

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